Sharon asks…What are your thoughts on my prologue?My story is of a young girl who left home to join the army. After a tough 6 months she return to her hometown hoping to see her old boyfriend, only to discover that she isn't the only one who has struggled the past two years. Here goes:
Prologue
The heat was unbearable as always. The sun was high in the sky, causing everything to look far too bright. The air was thick with dust and the
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